Marleve - nightmare
aaroens - alien like creatures
altesers - parasite like birds
ambolenses - evil hounds
mycran - cliche
underquereum - a dream you have in comatose
yolsusll - peaceful and quiet
Last part: You can probably figure it out, they're real words in a different order...
Nice blog! I liked how it rhymed, I even sang it out loud and you where there! I liked the unique words that you used, they felt like the actual words that they where.
ReplyDeleteGreat Blog, i seriously really loved it. Not only does it rhyme but it is so incredibly true! It captures a different point of view that I don't really know all that well! Giving you a 4!
ReplyDeleteI absolutely loved your poem. I was highly interested in fact that you reversed some words in your poem. The fact that you chose your title to be "Late Night Reverie" interested me, it was an absolute stroke of genius.
ReplyDeleteYour poem was really different than a lot of the other poems, and that made it really unique and interesting and just everything good! It rhymed, but it wasn't forced. It told a story, but it was creative and a not-random one. And also, I agree with Maria! The title of your poem alone captured my interest! Really awesome job. (Johnlock would say this is 'Smashing' xD)
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DeleteI really liked your poem, not many people did one with an actual plot. What gave you the idea for it?
ReplyDeleteI love how you use the same words, but in a different order. No one has done that before:)
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